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PhotographMy heart flutters and skips a beat as her face peers through the photograph. She’s in bed, splayed, looking so enticing and yet still so innocent. And, in her eyes… a message.

Come to me. Be with me. Hold me.

My arms ache. Every breath trembles and breaks off in my chest.

I want her. I want this exotic, ripe, sensual goddess of a woman. I want her to look at me the way she looks at the camera. I want her to lay at my side, in my arms.

But can I? May I? Everything that I want and everything that is right seem to battle together, becoming so separated and so conjoined while I stare at this woman that I can no longer tell them a

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Submitted: January 22
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Mech Headby *onefyasko

Digital Art / Drawings / Illustrations / Conceptual

This was a concept I sketched that I hope to incorporate into a larger scenery piece later down the road. After sketching it my friend Nef colored it and this was the product. She did an awesome job with the coloring, even though she was only supposed to do a quick 1 hour paint. I'll link her profile when she decides to make one.

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Critique by *Skitterkins Mar 5, 2013, 6:13:15 PM

Awesome! I really like alien looking characters and stuff! I think the colours are suitable. I think you could have use more space of the page. I also think you could have made those things on its head bigger and not so together.

The flame is cool and you have used a nice simple technique. The detail in this is crazy, I think the teeth stand out the most. This looks very realistic and you have captured the dynamics of the face really well like the cheeks and nose area.

Awesome job, I would like to see more of this cool stuff!

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Critique by ~CobianCat Mar 5, 2013, 5:41:05 PM

First of all, I would like to say you did a fantastic job. : ) I really enjoy the colors that you decided to use. The soul look of it it very nice.

I feel like the cords at the top stand out a bit too much. It looks like a different style. They look a lot more "cartooned" if that makes any sense.

I also feel like you could use a lot more detail in the mouth area. It's has a nice amount of shades, but I feel like it could be defined a bit more. Make some more stretch lines due to the fact that it is smiling.

That's all I have to say. You did a wonderful job! Keep it up! : )

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~shavarie Mar 1, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

cool

~HoshinoDestiny Feb 22, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Awesome!

~zldslim Jan 22, 2013

Very nice. Kinda looks like a mech version of something you'd see in Doom.

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